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Mark Crutchfield's avatar

Wow Becky!

Working now and can’t to come back to this later with a better comment!

Love that the image inspired you for such a great poem!

Andrea Thorfinson's avatar

Okay first… this made me cringe a little 😅 I am NOT a water person. When I was little, my stepdad would take us across Puget Sound in a little motor boat, and I was convinced sharks were just… waiting. I didn’t know there weren’t sharks there, so I would literally sing to them so they’d be happy and not eat me 😂 So yeah, this definitely hit that old fear in me. But I really love where you took it at the end. That shift into surrender, into becoming part of it instead of fighting it… Like letting go without losing yourself. Well done, loved it.

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