Chum
Image Poem Prompt
Author’s Note: Don’t mind me, just doing that thing again where I don’t want something lost in the notes forever.
Mark Crutchfield posted this prompt:
And our own wonderful pm wrote something beautiful, and I was fortunate enough to be tagged:
Here is my attempt:
And I’m including it in a post here so it doesn’t get lost (although I did edit the ending for this posted version from my original note).
From Mark Crutchfield:
Image prompt time.
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A short poem, prose,
single line or even word
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Optional, of course.
Restack and share to pass on.
Chum
We’ve been rowing for days
The cold, the mist
and the morning haze
By day,
the sun comes in blistering
Nothing to drink,
just the salty water whispering
But nights like these
they are so dark
No moonlit glow,
no star’s spark
Capsized and stranded
we row in this sea
Seeking land or a ship
just anybody
We see them circle,
These swells come alive
We row and row
It’s how we intend to survive
They close the perimeter
we see the fins tightening
Our faces stoic
Although quite frightening
“Keep on lads!”
our Captain shouts
“Stay steady, boys
and don’t look out!”
“Eyes ahead,
we’ll make it through!
This night is tough
but so are you!”
We quicken our pace
to our Captain’s charm
But just then, a shark jumps up
and bites clean off the Captain’s arm!
We take our oars
and attempt to fight!
And I do not cry
as I watch my entire leg disappear in one swift bite!
I have become chum
floating in the water
I look up at the stars
And let my mind
begin to wander
Am I now floating?
It’s hard to know
This body and blood
are just now part of this ocean’s flow
I look toward the light
it’s welcoming.
Dare I say,
is it beckoning?
Flying or floating,
up high or below
I somehow seem to only know
That it is okay
to continue to row.




Wow Becky!
Working now and can’t to come back to this later with a better comment!
Love that the image inspired you for such a great poem!
Okay first… this made me cringe a little 😅 I am NOT a water person. When I was little, my stepdad would take us across Puget Sound in a little motor boat, and I was convinced sharks were just… waiting. I didn’t know there weren’t sharks there, so I would literally sing to them so they’d be happy and not eat me 😂 So yeah, this definitely hit that old fear in me. But I really love where you took it at the end. That shift into surrender, into becoming part of it instead of fighting it… Like letting go without losing yourself. Well done, loved it.