Poetry Prompt Challenge from Lani Nieu
"You didn't know what you would be put through,
What you will be put through.
The hairs on my arms stood at that one! Really nicely done.
Oh wow. Huge compliment. Thank you!!
This is so beautiful, Becky… that line “And I did nothing” really hit me. There’s something so honest about how you captured both the holding and the hurting all at once.
And “two small lights refusing the dark”… that will stay with me. 💛
Damn… this one hit different. That “I did nothing” line got me, and that ending is so good. Heavy but still somehow hopeful. Always love your work!
What a gorgeous poem... mysterious and all-seeing. Fantastic!
Thank you, Alicia!!!
Yup... still love love love this! 🖤💚
Thank you so much, gir!!
Two small lights refusing the dark is such a tiny fierce image... Felt myself curl right around that one~
Thank you so much @AsukaHotaru !! I’m very literal and direct, so writing as Mother Nature was definitely a challenge!
"You didn't know what you would be put through,
What you will be put through.
The hairs on my arms stood at that one! Really nicely done.
Oh wow. Huge compliment. Thank you!!
This is so beautiful, Becky… that line “And I did nothing” really hit me. There’s something so honest about how you captured both the holding and the hurting all at once.
And “two small lights refusing the dark”… that will stay with me. 💛
Damn… this one hit different. That “I did nothing” line got me, and that ending is so good. Heavy but still somehow hopeful. Always love your work!
What a gorgeous poem... mysterious and all-seeing. Fantastic!
Thank you, Alicia!!!
Yup... still love love love this! 🖤💚
Thank you so much, gir!!
Two small lights refusing the dark is such a tiny fierce image... Felt myself curl right around that one~
Thank you so much @AsukaHotaru !! I’m very literal and direct, so writing as Mother Nature was definitely a challenge!