Single-handedly you've got me reading fiction again! As many people have mentioned already, you are able to create emotional tension so incredibly well. You're a really gifted writer 🙂 Even if I can't read your pieces immediately, I keep them unread so I can get to them in the future (like right now!). Keep going, Becky 🙌
Ahh!! tears in my eyes with your words! I’m hoping you’re able to take some time from all the work you’re doing. You’re literally everywhere! I see it!! lol. Doing such good out there, but don’t forget you. So take your time and there’s never any obligation to read my silly stuff. lol. But I do love that you enjoy it! I’ve got the next installment in the works for this one!! 🙌🏻 More tension underway!
A meeting to check if the disappointment was the correct way to sum up a relationship. I approve of the conclusion, Becky! Isn't it funny, it's always the same.
The hand on her bare knee, just placed there and not moving, made me actually stop breathing for a second.. like, "excuseeee meeeee." I'm melting here...!
I really liked that. You can feelnthe tension and the emotion, you build it superbly well, throughout.
Single-handedly you've got me reading fiction again! As many people have mentioned already, you are able to create emotional tension so incredibly well. You're a really gifted writer 🙂 Even if I can't read your pieces immediately, I keep them unread so I can get to them in the future (like right now!). Keep going, Becky 🙌
Ahh!! tears in my eyes with your words! I’m hoping you’re able to take some time from all the work you’re doing. You’re literally everywhere! I see it!! lol. Doing such good out there, but don’t forget you. So take your time and there’s never any obligation to read my silly stuff. lol. But I do love that you enjoy it! I’ve got the next installment in the works for this one!! 🙌🏻 More tension underway!
Your stuff is not silly whatsoever 🙂 Can’t wait for the next one!
Oh…wow
Thank you!! Love that response!! ❤️❤️
Wow, this gripped me, Becky! What a great read! 😊
Cory!! Thank you so much for reading! So glad it hooked you (maybe w a pinky lol)!!
A pinky?!?! 😂
Thank you for writing. ❤️ I loved it!
Nice story! It's a cohesive scene, and you def captured how the characters seem to feel. Thanks for sharing this!
I am going to read it again tomorrow night! I accidentally deleted the video!
Yes!!!
A meeting to check if the disappointment was the correct way to sum up a relationship. I approve of the conclusion, Becky! Isn't it funny, it's always the same.
So true!
Reading this, I felt a tingle of electricity. What more can I say?
Oh thank you so much for reading and omg! If you felt the electricity, I am so so glad!!
From “we died” to “this is the line” fifteen years later?
That’s not a meet-cute. That’s a holding pattern over unfinished business.
The pinky in the first story was sweet.
The pinky in this one is dangerous.
And “For now.”
Yeah… that’s not a drink order. That’s a delayed departure.
You absolutely knew what you were doing here.
Bravo Becky Bravo!!! 👏🏻
Thank you soooo much!! 🙏🙏
The hand on her bare knee, just placed there and not moving, made me actually stop breathing for a second.. like, "excuseeee meeeee." I'm melting here...!
Oooh boy! Love it!!
"The weight of fifteen years presses between them. There’s no anger or accusation anymore. Just facts. Just history."
Great line.
Also, we need Before Midnight next.
Thank you so much!!
I’ll work on that!!
So good I had chills!
Thanks Sam!!
I've told you elsewhere but you do emotional tension very well :)
I very much agree with this assessment!
Oh my goodness!! Thanks so much @Mike Underell !! truly!!
So kind!!!😭😭And seriously your opinion means so much to me! ❤️
Oh Becky, this one has me in the feels for so many reasons.
Oh I’m so glad you felt this with me. Thank you so much for reading this!
Oh man, the reunion pinky touch... been there... missed the movie we planned on watching... giggled like teens in the car...
Thank you for sparking that memory in me!
And thank you soooo much for reading!!
Oh yay!! So glad it brought you back!!
Becky 😳
The tension in this was phenomenal!👏 🕯️
Thank you!!! Those pinkies amirite?? lol